Things to add...
-sound effects for impact
-suspense building music that continues throughout
-quicker shots which give glimpse of narrative
What went well...
-good shots
-use of non continuity editing
-dialogue
-dramatic hand at the end
-title style
-audience were intrigued
-acting from all cast members
To ensure that Zoe and I include all of this feedback within our second draft of Left Behind we will make a 'to do list' of the various things we need to include/tweak. Within our second draft we will make sure to include; intertitles, and a billing block 'coming soon...'. Also, to avoid not hearing a key part to the trailer we will increase the volume of our news report.
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