Draft Two Feedback

When reviewing our trailer we noticed that there is an error in one of the shots. I can be seen in the reflection of one of the windows. Within our next draft we will make sure there are no mistakes like this. To fix the reflection error, Zoe cropped the shots framing so I was not to be seen. Also, we are going to add a main track that runs throughout the trailer, and more sound effects to the next draft. This draft was to focus on the visuals, our next draft will have complete accurate sound.

In order to make our third draft we will respond to the feedback we got from draft two. The feedback was to;

• Add visual effects to the trailer
• Intersperse shorter clips with longer ones
• Ensure the focal points are clear

One comment we received was that the visuals made the audience feel claustrophobic due to all of the close up shots. For this project we believe that this comment is positive as our intention is to make the audience feel uncomfortable. Also, within trailers we have researched close ups are a common convention as it conveys the genre successfully.